statement of purpose'a yazılmaması gereken şeyler

• bu da stil ve format olarak uygun oldugu halde, icerik acisindan fazlasiyla rizikoludur:
  the main question i shall address in this essay is why it is so important for me to be admitted into purdue. well, i have spend my undergrad years in a very vibrant atmosphere in istanbul...the night shift, as we used to call it, requires diligence and patience. i am proud to admit that i have been all over club culture magazines, web sites, discussion groups just to add to the prestige of my university which was under-represented in istanbul club scene... i have been the president of the istanbul branch of the international organization "free dope" and i have organized many tours to amsterdam via my own company, which is a clear indicator of my capacity as an entrepreneur. i am the ideal mba student for you!